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Post by pyrodescorpio2 on Jan 17, 2008 2:22:25 GMT -5
ooooo good start! and ppor sam! kids are assholes!
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lisa
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Post by lisa on Jan 17, 2008 11:33:54 GMT -5
I loved this start sweetie! The whole diary and Dawn snooping about. Man, Buffy would lose it if she ever found out what Dawn had actually been doing.
The reasoning for Buffy's change into popular bitchiness was so wonderful! I love when the author can give us reason and since canon has never said anything about what Buffy was like or why she was the way she was pre-slayer this fits so perfectly! I can see her defending Sam and Dean then taking care of her for it. Gods, I'd love to see a drabble of Buffy punching that girl for what she said to Sam or the three of them waiting for Buffy's mom to come pick her up.
Lovely shiny start! Really enjoyed this hun.
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Post by IceBlueRose on Jan 17, 2008 13:23:35 GMT -5
ooooo good start! and ppor sam! kids are assholes! Thanks! And yeah, they really are, aren't they? Grrr at them!
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Post by IceBlueRose on Jan 17, 2008 13:29:11 GMT -5
I loved this start sweetie! The whole diary and Dawn snooping about. Man, Buffy would lose it if she ever found out what Dawn had actually been doing. The reasoning for Buffy's change into popular bitchiness was so wonderful! I love when the author can give us reason and since canon has never said anything about what Buffy was like or why she was the way she was pre-slayer this fits so perfectly! I can see her defending Sam and Dean then taking care of her for it. Gods, I'd love to see a drabble of Buffy punching that girl for what she said to Sam or the three of them waiting for Buffy's mom to come pick her up. Lovely shiny start! Really enjoyed this hun. Can't you just see Buffy if she ever caught Dawn with that diary? Especially since this is one that she's managed to actually hide. Yay! I'm glad the reason that Buffy changed worked for you. I just couldn't picture her being mean as a kid. Buffy bitchy as a teenager? Sure. But the little girl that played Power Girl with her cousin, declaring she'd save her? I don't see her being mean to other kids. And hee! I couldn't get the image of the boys waiting with her until Joyce showed up. Thanks so much for reading, Lisa! I always love seeing what you have to say.
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Post by pureevil230 on Nov 7, 2010 22:09:11 GMT -5
uh oh nosy dawn found something, wonder what more she'll find about the two hidden brothers. write more soon please!
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